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Protagonist (former con artist)
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Name: Tracy
Background: Ran away from home at sixteen and was taken in by a con artist named Cherry who tricked her out and taught her various cons.
Motivation: When the story starts, Tracy is leaving a relationship with a married man. She targets TIM because she's intrigued by the asterisk next to his name and he lived in the middle over nowhere -- a great place to disappear. She is just looking for a couple of thousand dollars to buy her a vacation in Bermuda.
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Establish the “normal” world
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2. The Meet-Cute (or Meet-Complicated)
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Introduction of the Love Interest
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Fred is middle-aged, with thinning hair and a beer belly.
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He meets Tracy at his local bar.
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Conflict in Attraction
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Tracy is not attracted to Fred, but she thinks he's nice, she wants to figure out what his deal is, and she needs a place to sleep, so she goes home with him.
Fred is attracted to Tracy; she's smart, pretty, and quick-witted, but he doesn't expect anything to come out of their initial interaction, recognizing her as too young and pretty for him.
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Early chemistry and small moments of honesty that unsettle the protagonist.
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3. Building Connection
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Growing Relationship
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Fred is incredibly generous with his material goods. He usually has people staying with him, but Tracy kicks them all out.
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Tracy gets a job at Fred's used car lot.
She finds out where Fred's vault is, but it turns out that everyone knows the combo. It's "1,2,34".
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Echoes of the Old Life
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Tracy's colleagues start coming in to purchase used cars from Fred.
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They all subtly warn Tracy off of bilking Fred for more than $5,000.
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4. The Past Catches Up
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Exposure Risk
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Tracey finds a pink cherry blossom on her porch, a calling card of her old madam and current nemesis.
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Cherry comes in to purchase a car from Fred, and Tracy takes her out for a test drive.
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Tracy tells Cherry to leave her and Fred alone, but Cherry still feels like Tracy owes her.
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Moral Pressure
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Tracy tells Fred about Cherry and warns him to be careful.
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She plans to leave, but Fred offers to go with her. He says he has a million dollars they can start over with. He has no emotional ties to the car lot or anything in that town.
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5. The Breaking Point
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The Secret Revealed
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Cherry kidnaps Fred and holds him hostage in exchange for Tracy.
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She tries to undermine Fred's trust in Tracy by sharing some of Tracy's old secrets, but this just makes Fred hate Cherry even more.
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6. Climax – The True Test
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Moment of Choice
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Tracy comes to rescue Fred. She knows Cherry's true identity and her Achilles' heel.
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Emotional Confrontation
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Reunited, Tracy and Fred go home together.
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7. Resolution – After the Truth
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Consequences
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Fred has bought Tracy a puppy, and they stick around town for a bit longer.
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- Final Image
- Tracy finds a white cherry blossom on her porch. Cherry needs help, but she's asking this time.
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